Monday, 7 August 2017

Jeremiah and Pratham's Description


No... It’s not a bird


As I glance down in dismay, from the corner of my eye I catch something rather perplexing.  At first I think it’s a colossal bird, but as I look up I see threatening claws, razor sharp teeth and a long slim body.  “GRRRRRRRRR.”  I take out my telescope and as I blink again, my eyes tell me something different...  Something petrifying.  At this moment my heart is beating out of my chest.  A Tiger!? I am terrified out of my skin.  All of them were swiftly, gliding away, so I ran as fast as the flash to my steering wheel to catch up.  But I just realized, that my rudder has fallen down on the great green ground.  I was so gutted that I could make the whole world cry.  

GREAT PARAGRAPH,NEXT TIME JUST USE MORE METAPHORS AND SIMILES, TORRES.

In writing the class watched a short film that I and my partner had to describe.

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