No... It’s not a bird
As I glance down in dismay, from the corner of my eye I catch something rather perplexing. At first I think it’s a colossal bird, but as I look up I see threatening claws, razor sharp teeth and a long slim body. “GRRRRRRRRR.” I take out my telescope and as I blink again, my eyes tell me something different... Something petrifying. At this moment my heart is beating out of my chest. A Tiger!? I am terrified out of my skin. All of them were swiftly, gliding away, so I ran as fast as the flash to my steering wheel to catch up. But I just realized, that my rudder has fallen down on the great green ground. I was so gutted that I could make the whole world cry.
GREAT PARAGRAPH,NEXT TIME JUST USE MORE METAPHORS AND SIMILES, TORRES.
In writing the class watched a short film that I and my partner had to describe.