Thursday, 12 May 2016

Formal letter to principal.

Dear Mrs Davies Crook,

I was wondering if we could be allowed were allowed to have one day a
week for us to bring our devices like an iPad, laptop or a tablet to school?

To me, I think it’s a good idea to see what students would do when they're
not at school so teachers know what you like doing.  Teachers would also want
a break from helping children for 5 days.  But if they had one day a week when
they don’t have to teach, nobody would  want to miss it and students will always
come to school.

Bringing our devices to school is sometimes better for things like maybe you
downloaded a game on your own device you won't have it on the school ones.
You also won’t be allowed to download anything on any school devices.  Teachers
and principals don’t don’t like having downloaded things on their devices that could
slow down computers or even catch a virus.

After all this explaining I think every student should be allowed to
bring their own school once a week.

Yours sincerely,

1 comment:

  1. Well Done Jeremiah, an interesting idea

    You have shown good use of paragraphs and sentence starters. You have voiced your opinion and given evidence.

    Work on developing your ideas to add more detail to your writing.
    Please make sure you edit and proof read your writing