Wednesday, 15 November 2017

The Cheeky Chipmunk

I promise it's not what is looks like….

I was just having a nice and relaxing day when I found a corn farm.  I curiously look around until I find the biggest, shiniest, juicy corn.  I pluck it out of the ground with all my strength and when it comes out I fly backwards.  Getting up with no fear I  carelessly shove the sweet corn in my mouth like how a beaver would chop a tree.  Closing my eyes, gobbling up the sweet corn was never better.  I had a mouth full of corn, still closing my eyes blessed with sweet corn I open my eyes to a peculiar sighting.  “A red corn on the cob ?” Then I freeze with fear.  “Come here you little brat.” Running back to my house through the woods and up the hill, I finally reach my front door.  I Slam the door open and sprint up the stairs and forget about the incident.  “Well at least I had my dinner”

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Wednesday, 8 November 2017

Running Wild Diorama

In Our reading task Our teacher gave a novel called running wild.  Once we finished the book we chose different parts of the book to create a diorama of. 

                                            Here are some images












Friday, 29 September 2017

Formal Letter to Prime Minister

Halsey Drive School
106 Halsey Drive
Lynfield
Rt Hon Bill English/Jacinda Ardern       Auckland
Prime Minister          1042
Freepost Parliament
Private Bag 18 888
Parliament Buildings
Wellington 6160


Thursday 21st September 2017


Dear Prime Minister,


Congratulations on your successful election campaign in 2017.  My class and I have been discussing and following the election and talking about many of the major key issues.  Regrettably I feel there’s an issue that has been lacking from the debates.  In my opinion I think that the voting age should be reduced down to the age of 16.  We all know that you are a very proficient man so i'm hoping you will acknowledge my argument.


To start things off, I think that young adults should be allowed to vote at the age of 16 as it is important that they have an opinion and can be optimistic about their future.  Without a doubt some might argue that 16 year olds are not capable to vote and are too immature.  But I believe that at 16, our young adults are more globally aware and can make the legitimate choices towards the election.  Therefore this is why you should give 16 year olds an opportunity to vote and make the appropriate choices.


We all know that New Zealand is an excellent country.  I hope you take my argument seriously and make an effort towards my argument. The future of New Zealand is in your hands.


Yours sincerely,

Jeremiah

Tuesday, 15 August 2017

How Are Tsunami's Caused

     In reading me and my partner Pratham needed to describe how a tsunami was caused.  
 In a book we read a tsunami happened at Indonesia and a boy and his mum got caught in it.

Tuesday, 8 August 2017

My Pepeha

Jeremiah’s Pepeha
No Auckland āhau (I come from...)

Ko  Puketāpapa  tōku maunga (My Mountain is Puketapapa)

Ko Manukau  tōku moana(My Sea is the Manuka)

Ko Halsey drive te kura(My school is …)

Ko Craig neeve tōku papa    (Dad’s first and last name)
No Auckland ia    (My Dad is from...)
Ko Irene Neevetōku mama     (Mum’s first and last name)
No Malaysia ia     (My Mum is from...)
Ko Denis Neeve Raua Ko John Lia tōku Koro     (Grandfather’s first and last name)
No New Zealand Raua Malaysia ia     (My Grandfather  is from...)
Ko Jannette Raua Annietōku Kuia   (Grandmother’s first and last name)
No New Zealand raua Malaysia ia     (My Grandmother  is from...)
Ko_tōku Tuakana (Older siblings first name)
Ko Justine tōku Teina (younger siblings first name)
Ko Jeremiah tōku ingoa   (...is my name)

Monday, 7 August 2017

Jeremiah and Pratham's Description


No... It’s not a bird


As I glance down in dismay, from the corner of my eye I catch something rather perplexing.  At first I think it’s a colossal bird, but as I look up I see threatening claws, razor sharp teeth and a long slim body.  “GRRRRRRRRR.”  I take out my telescope and as I blink again, my eyes tell me something different...  Something petrifying.  At this moment my heart is beating out of my chest.  A Tiger!? I am terrified out of my skin.  All of them were swiftly, gliding away, so I ran as fast as the flash to my steering wheel to catch up.  But I just realized, that my rudder has fallen down on the great green ground.  I was so gutted that I could make the whole world cry.  

GREAT PARAGRAPH,NEXT TIME JUST USE MORE METAPHORS AND SIMILES, TORRES.

In writing the class watched a short film that I and my partner had to describe.